Dear Patricia,
What you have shared here is a masterpiece in the making. From your intro, I knew, we were in for a treat. Ms Jacquii is right, oh that first line......The first line set the tone, and I sat up in my chair. You captivated me throughout the entire journey Patricia. The word play and imagery was genious. I felt the "hounds of hell" nipp MY HEELS!! Also skillfully written, like a quilt with each piece perfectly fitted and sewn. I enjoyed this story immensely. Look forward to reading Part 2. The last line left me wanting more! Outstanding Job On Part 1 Of Your Novel!
Much Luv'...~*Painted Diary*~
