Hey KIM - I am loving this piece very very much - It's really just a bit short of amazing how the last two lines really sums up such a TRUTH that most can relate too... It's like some sort of juxtaposition between what could/should be and what truly is... It's sort of sad, as SEBBY has noted - but it's so well written that I can't help but to smile. A kind of half-knowing, yet really wanting to deny knowledge - type of smile. Bitter, yet complacent...
If that even makes any bit of sense LOL
Quote:
the figures kiss (Good Bye)
but never kiss (Hello)
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Yep - I've known this feeling that you've so amply and aptly described.
At anyrate - This is a very interesting piece of poetry - I enjoyed this one!
Thanx for sharing it.
Jacquii.
