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Old 01-02-2007, 03:36 AM
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I edited this to make a little more sense. But this poem is not really about me. Althought I am not orignaly from the states, I have grown up here. I was just describing the struggle many people go through in the persuit to establish themselves as someone, in a land that doesnt want to give them the dream. I also feel that the way you write something has alot to do with how the person reads it. sometimes its not sposed to be spelled right. or the order of the words are places so that the reader, hears or thinks about a certain word before another. to paint an image. but thanks to all who have commented. It means alot!



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