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Hey Starry!
Although the words and the message are beautiful, the rhyme scheme is not consitent. The first quatrain is a,a,a,a and the second and third quatrains are a,a,b,b. None are a,b,a,b and it does not seem to have any set syllable count either, which throws the rhythm off in spots. It does however, have perfect rhymes.
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