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01-24-2007, 02:49 AM

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Benny

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I love your ode to New York! She is a majestic lady...breath taking in her splendor and mire both. I must say...I like the first version better...with the breakdown in its simplicity to the eye. It is very long and that always is a harder read for me, personally. Your work flows well and works all the way to the end in scheme...I am no critical help...I just know what I like. I like.