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ALAN the JPiCan of Grumps Royalty
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Location: Sussex, England
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Biography: Father of five, Grumps to two, I've been writing poetry since '93, and also love helping other poets
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Dear Therese,
As an admirer of your writing, I can safely say, yes, this is an abstract. Though it is so abstract I have no idea what you are talking about ! Inverness ? Lovely town ! But why here?
I do think YOU need to get a firmer idea of where you are going with this, before you have much hope of dragging us along.
Neg review, sorry, but does it help ? That "??" says it all.
Love
Alan
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