I decided to revise my original post called "
Song of David" to refine it, with rhythm and rhyme. The person I called upon to help me was
Sartor , so I want to thank him
publically, and send a big hug
!! LOL!!!
Sartor was kind enough to spend precious time with me, back and forth via e-mail. He taught me allot about poetry writing in this style. I am grateful for him to do this, and wanted to share the results with the Community.
I PM'd Ms Jacquii for her approval and expertise, and she gave me the ok to post.....
Hope you all enjoy this.....
Song Of David
Enamored I, a smitten soul,
because of feelings, once taboo,
with a transcendent love I stroll,
walking the path of love with you.
Tranquility, your silken voice,
when softly speaking love to me,
I'm left with galaxies of choice
and gleaming rainbow potpourri.
A crystal moon of silver blue,
painted our bodies argent white.
Emotions that, for me were new,
swirled in the magic of that night.
On damp and tangled sheets we lay,
beneath the silvered lunar beams.
Amid sweet scent of love's bouquet,
at last I realize my dreams.
See now, my Eagle soars aloft,
'tis love for you, in regal flight,
revealing layers sweet and soft,
of secrets on our wedding night.
When Wisdom paints my hair in gray,
my aged hands, will hold your face.
Beyond the grave our love shall stay
and we shall sing, in Love's embrace.
