Hey KIM - I told you.... This poem is just so beautiful to me... The meter, rhythm and rhyme of the poem is quite brilliant actually - but when you add all that with the sentimentality and heartfelt l-o-v-e ---- it just sings like a beautiful ballad of sorts.
Quote:
Tranquility, your silken voice,
when softly speaking love to me,
I'm left with galaxies of choice
and gleaming rainbow potpourri.
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I like this stanza very much - the idea of "rainbow potpourri" lends a bit of mysterious scent to the poem LOL (((can't think of the word I want to use right now.... olefactery doesn't sound right
))) but anyway it just makes the poem smell good --- for lack of better terminology lol
I also very much like the rhyme of "love to me" with "potpourri" --- very nice!
A lovely write for me KIM and a beautiful dexterity you've shown with this one - I really like it!
Jacquii.
