Sartor - First off, I wanna say that this is lovely. It made me remember why I joined up in the first place.
Thank you.
Whether she’s standing at the gale,
or floating on the breeze,
or snapping in an autumn wind,
it sets my heart at ease
To see Old Glory on parade,
or through a vale of trees,
and on a solders uniform,
its never failed to please.
As this old Veteran proudly stands,
allegiance I renew,
just ask and I will give my blood,
For I bleed red, white and blue.
I highlighted in dark red what I would change in the last stanza, just to smooth out the rythmn. Feel free to adopt or chuck it. ^^
