OMFG KIM - you comment made me almost weep --- Seriously Thank you So much!
I'm glad you enjoyed this - It was a quick write actually - jotted down in about 15 minutes with a little editing. It can be read either line for line AS WELL AS read structured with the puntuation. There's a deeper meaning when you read as if written like regular sentence - just have to be particularly mindful of the punctuation - so it's an abstract - but also a verbal format I tried with this piece.
Of course - It's the story of my life LOL ---- But I shall keep my secrets!
Thanx for your comment KIM - now I look forward to your Pushkin Sonnet
Jacquii.
