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Yes Ms J, that is a unique vision flowing from your pen, I liked this a lot. Great job. You're right PD, this is a challenging form - but I did give it a go.
The Dream
Visions of his secret love
Play themselves into his dreams,
Flesh-tone granite rises above
To meet his ladylove and seems
To blend Love and lust; an exotic distiller,
And smother her delicate ghostly pillar
With love and affection that’s truly inspired
By her as the one love he greatly desired
To writhe and throe with complete abandon
And cherish and taste of the forbidden fruit,
Which chasing through dreams in hot pursuit
Has left him to be her last man standin’.
In dreams they meet for their adulterous tryst;
In dreams they have something they cannot resist.
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