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Old 03-30-2007, 12:55 PM
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LASHER - very nice Pushkin Sonnet - I like this one very much- it captures the artwork exquisitely!

I love the last 2 lines:

Quote:
In dreams they meet for their adulterous tryst;
In dreams they have something they cannot resist.
Sounds good to me! LOL - I wonder how on earth to actually make dreams reality.
Interesting write though - Lovely response to the challenge
Thanx for sharing!

I will respectfully (and very quietly) point out though - you only used 1 of the rhyming couples in your 2nd quatrain



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