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Originally Posted by lasher
You're right PD, this is a challenging form - but I did give it a go.
The Dream
Visions of his secret love
Play themselves into his dreams,
Flesh-tone granite rises above
And cherish and taste of the forbidden fruit,
Which chasing through dreams in hot pursuit
In dreams they meet for their adulterous tryst;
In dreams they have something they cannot resist.
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Dear lasher
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Yes, this is quite challenging yet you seem to capture the ultimate essence of the art blended exquisitely with an intricate display of poetic filigree. I cannot imagine, after Ms Jacquii's and your submission to even come close. Such mastery level is acquired, and am not sure, I am equipped to do so. I knew you were one to watch, and am in awe of your work Mr. lasher. Just divine! Just wow!
poet!!! I will check back for the second one as well.
{{{~~**PD**~~}}}
