Hmmmm - Being the "vintage depressing" Jacquii that I tend to be at times - I thought this was not particularly funny, but a demanding of respect and equality that each who have stepped on such a turmoiled earth deserve, before having become undeserving. (If that makes sense...)
As a person who has been trampled underfoot by uncaring, unemotional, dimwitted haters
(Powers That Be) --- who will in fact take advantage of every & any thing that has the ability to be taken advantage of --- I feel this poem is a shout out saying Stop It!
Anyway - may be reading this kinda wrong - don't know - but such is the power of poetry, to entice the many different emotions available - whilst espousing some kind of knowledge. (I'm rambling - so let me cut it short
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Quote:
If you can’t fix this body’s problems,
Find who has been enjoying my pain,
Replace this model with a better one please,
Or issue a refund check, Powers That Be.
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There's power in these words GAIL!
I'd actually like to find the one who has ever caused my pain, so that I may Judge proper, effeciently and with expediency that such is deserving.
Nice poem - Thanx for sharing.
Jacquii.
