I think 1st MS N - You need a title for this piece! What is it?
As far as abstract: Definitely - some vivid images - but what does it lead to?
For me this poem seems like God walking in His heaven, contemplating Earth's destruction, thus leading to renewal of some sort.
Anyway - ROFL - I don't how on earth that would look in a painting - but it would certainly be interesting to look at LOL...
Very interesting though - some fabulous word combinations - But 1st - It has to have a title... Name it and I'll change it for ya - Be sure to send me a PM so I'll know
ALSO - be more specific in your request if you will please.
Jacquii.