Altree94

Hi Dan!
Welcome to JPic!
Read your poem and thought it a great introduction poem because it shows YOU very well.
You know that old adage:
The best way to have a friend is to BE a friend.
That same principal works everywhere.
In all poetry and writing forums it translates to:
The best way to get comments is to give comments.
From what I have seen of your writing skills - I think you could be a valuable addition to the site, if you so choose. If you are looking for in-depth critiques, we have a special forum here just for that! If you simply want to put it out there to share, that's what all of the other forums here are for. If you come up against writer's block - we have a Creativity Challenge section to get you thinking! And if you just want to relax and take a break - that's what the arcade is here for! We have it all and I think you are going to love it!
- Tree.