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Old 07-31-2006, 08:50 AM
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Always nice reading a self-affirmation piece - This speaks of an undying strength even through the most brutal of turmoil!

Hey TANAX - I got to one stanza in particular, as I can definitely relate to the words that you've written:

But I'm trying to catch up, to adjust, to fit in.
Of course I'll be myself, but I'll try to hide it as best as I can.. within.


First thought that came immediately to mind: "NO! No - don't ever try to hide it!"

Releasing tension has never been a bad thing LOL... Anyway - I kinda just wanted to say AW and give you a hug, as this piece just screams LOVE ME - I'm a person too.

AND as far as not being cute and stuff (had a very knowing laugh with the wax line ) You have shared some very beautiful words with the Community - And I for one am glad you have!

Thanx!

Jacquii.



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