Dear Chris,
This was a very interesting story. Very real life, and that dang newspaper! I could actually see this playing out. Very down to Earth, and could relate. I actually envisioned a smooth pastel painting that would work well with this story. Great job, and I loved reading this. Has many components, as humor, caring, real life, raw emotion, as etc. and blended very well.
{{{~~**KIMBERLY**~~}}}
