Quote:
Originally Posted by Sartor
Web-netted there I wait,
while slowly stirring embers in my mind,
the flame of inspiration there to find,
so eager to create.
Benighted, I await the absent glow,
casting my thoughts abroad.
The shadows sharpen to a high plateau,
in fearful wonderment ,I’m waiting, awed.
Bespangled you appear,
jeweled, perfect words afloat in your aura
ideal words that come in a plethora,
my Muse, at last, is here.
Sartor
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Dear Sartor
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This was magnificent! I love the compatibility and analogy of the Sea to Poetry! Perfect rhyme is your claim to fame, and you did not disappoint us here a bit! The selection of words were masterful as well. The last stanza was simply exquisite. I believe the scheme is abab c dd c, and was intriguing. Great write Sartor, and thank you for posting this beauty!
{{{{{~~~***KIMBERLY***~~~}}}}}
