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06-04-2007, 03:15 AM

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Wow.
this is...good.
Hmm. are you sure it's not a poem?
And....perhaps add some punctuation...it gives more meaning...
like..
at the end of phrases...you have some question marks...but like.
"it must be...
Alan always hit everything he aimed at."

but I really like it.
Is it based on something you experienced?

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