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PoetryInMotion
Real Name: Arthur Henn
Last Online: 12-31-2007 03:25 AM
Location: Southeren, California
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Biography: Been writing a little over a year now, still learning. My poetry comes from the "Heart"
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You two out did yourselves. I liked this very much.
Jazz, Ivory, Onyx, Love and romance and wrapped up in one.
I especially liked this part best.
A jazz era love affair; pure elegance
The way she enchants the keys would give one pause
Playin' a courtship of ivory swans and onyx doves
Butter cream smooth; she is a sophisticated lady
This alone is superb!
bravo! for both Of you.
Just a little tag of my own to these wonderful words, hope your ladies don't mind. I can't help myself. (((Hugs)))
Oh, and I love this line (Butter Cream Smooth) I'm gonna barrow this line and add to this little tag of a poem. This is what you two inspired.
"The Sophisticated Lady"
You are
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The melodies of soft jazz
We share
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Amongst each others hearts
Your heart is Is one I share
One I embrace each night
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Your love is only a breath away
A love I've always wished for
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While we lye together
In the ivory of your soul
I kiss your sweet tender lips
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"Butter Cream Smooth"
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Carrying you to the heart shaped
Rose garden
Of your soul
Art
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