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Originally Posted by Jeez
Beautifully done
to the both of
yous.
Can feel the
vibrations from
this write.
Yeah....
Thanks for the
read.
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Thanx for commenting JEEZ
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Originally Posted by lasher
Hey now MsJ and PD,
There's someone in tune with her piano, I do get visuals.....Great write, both of ya....
Fave line: "More scrumptious than Cezanne's peaches, this girl is bad....." I luv it!!!!
Scrumptious is another one of them there words that slay me........
You two should get together more often, thanx for the treat...
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Hey LASHER - thanx so much for commenting - Of course Cezanne is one of my favorite artistes and what should crazy me think of when channeling Sexy Jazz Girl? Peaches of course
--- Thanx again - glad you like it!
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Originally Posted by PaintedDiary
Ms Jacquii.......wooooohooo you out did yourself hir'! lol This is one hellified bad ass collab if I say so my self. My fav is the above quote, it is scrumptious, YES! Oh the images! We do need to do this more often! I loved it, and thanks everyone who commented. Hugs and kisses!
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Ah Shux! Twas a fantabulous collabo indeed MS KIM - now you see why I wanted to poet with you for so long - I think our styles really complimented each others and makes for a beautiful beautiful read! A pleasure GIRL
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Originally Posted by PoetryInMotion
You two out did yourselves. I liked this very much.
Jazz, Ivory, Onyx, Love and romance and wrapped up in one.
I especially liked this part best.
A jazz era love affair; pure elegance
The way she enchants the keys would give one pause
Playin' a courtship of ivory swans and onyx doves
Butter cream smooth; she is a sophisticated lady
This alone is superb!
bravo! for both Of you.
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One of my favorites too ART - I loved KIM's metaphor "ivory swans and onyx doves" AND the "butter cream smooth" Epitomizes the Artiste quite nicely!
Thanx so much for your comments AND you poem - If you like though - post your poem in its own thread - ALSO respond to the PM I sent you if would please!
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Glad YAWL enjoyed this poem - It was a thrill seeing it come together so nicely!
Jacquii.
