Oh MY! What a nice collection of haiku - Destined for publishing on Poetry-Defined.com indeed when I'm not so lazy LOL
Quote:
a tree fell down, up
on me, it’s still there! the
leaves are colorful
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I particularly loved this stanza as it shows an unfettered optimism of sorts - possibly even naive hope - And I'm all about my naivete... To think the tree fell upon me... The first thing I notice is the colorful leaves... That is SO me LOL - And so Tennessee actually - The colors in TN when the autumn comes = Amazing!
A very nice write MIKE = Thanx for sharing it!
Jacquii.