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Old 05-03-2008, 04:11 AM
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Dear Mysty,

This poem with "All Along" read like a personal account, and I pray not, for you deserve the world Mysty. However, your word selection in your craft is so spot-on! This piece is haunting and also is lingering. One cannot forget such a piece as is all your poetry. As it has been said, your poetry goes straight to the heart and plays the strings. Your poetry, as well as this piece, is captivating, and one just falls into it so naturally. I wonder how many people have experienced this very poem. Each stanza stands alone as well. I already read this several times, and each time I take away more and more.Always beautifully written, flawlessly executed, and never to leave our minds, evoking emotion and etc. It is always a treat to read your poetry as I know I will be emotionally moved, learn a lesson, and simply captured. Love it! What was your inspiration for this?

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