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Real Name: Kimberley D. Robinson
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Thank you Dave for reading and commenting....I appreciate your commentary. I did keep in mind the readers when scribing this, and decided that the entry is not too much to read if someone wants more, and not too much to read if someone does not like vampire stories. Additionally, I decided to introduce the Vampire element in the second entry.
The beauty of this craft, and one that I love is the fact that I can write with simplicity, go technical, or write advanced. After being a scientist for almost 20 years, my PhD documents, and Nasa (all required)..I only wrote in the latter. So now I love to express and experiment with my writing and creativity on all levels.
I will implement your suggestions, and thank you for them. The alignment was done that way for no other reason than my preference at the time, and experiment. However, formally, I do know the alignment would need to be adjusted.
Kim
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Last edited by PaintedDiary; 05-04-2008 at 12:00 PM.
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