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Very nice poem - I was actually surprised by this one - I read the 1st few lines and thought - ok this is a bit.............obvious. Then I read the following passage:
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all are wordless semantics of the mind
asemically structured in silence
to tell what we would read
were there something to be read.
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That was sweet and has almost a timeless quality to it - the wording is structured just so that the point has a bit of a poignant snap to it... I am a bit wondering if by "asemically" you mean "aesthetically" or even "systematically" - I'm not familiar with this "asemically" - is that a typo?
Anyway - a very enjoyable read and you paint quite the interesting analogy, as I've always been taught that poetry is "the best
words in their ultimately best order" --- Here though - you've made an interesting point that yes, perhaps when the Rossini soprano hits her highnote; That's poetry. Another way of thinking and I applaud you for that effect!
Nice share and welcome to JPiC!
Jacquii.