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Originally Posted by MsJacquiiC
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Very nice poem - I was actually surprised by this one - I read the 1st few lines and thought - ok this is a bit.............obvious. Then I read the following passage:
That was sweet and has almost a timeless quality to it - the wording is structured just so that the point has a bit of a poignant snap to it... I am a bit wondering if by "asemically" you mean "aesthetically" or even "systematically" - I'm not familiar with this "asemically" - is that a typo?
Anyway - a very enjoyable read and you paint quite the interesting analogy, as I've always been taught that poetry is "the best words in their ultimately best order" --- Here though - you've made an interesting point that yes, perhaps when the Rossini soprano hits her highnote; That's poetry. Another way of thinking and I applaud you for that effect!
Nice share and welcome to JPiC!
Jacquii. |
Thank you for your kind words. Asemically is defined as having no semantic content, i.e.,
pictograms, cave paintings, etc., as in Poems Without Words. Here is another in the same vain for your impression which is deeply appreciated:
LISTEN TO THE PAINTING - Poetry in Color Forum