I thought the first eight lines more visual poetry, images from words which are instantaneous, no thought needed to see them. Then you went into the next lines which pretty much say what I just did, lol.
I had clicked on this post just because I wanted to see how the title was possible. You definitely showed me how, lol.
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Originally Posted by Herb515
Erotic moments from music scored
in the ritual language of antiquity,
are visual poetry heard by all.
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I thought the above much more substantial in images, something you can sink your teeth into because you have to use your imagination to see what you're saying but it's worth the effort!
Great poem!
Gail
BTW, welcome to JPIC!
