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Real Name: Megan Stanley
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Biography: Hey, so I'm 15, have been writing poetry since I was about in 7th grade, and am just looking for some positive critique. Thanks :)
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From the land of the free, to the land of the the chaos
Bang bang bang
To the crosser on by
Now their dead
And its just me left behind
I got a pack of candy
And then left the store
Next thing I know
I see the kid shot from next door
My grandma says it wasn't always like this
That there was once complete safety, and joy
Complete safety and joy
Seems like a fairytale to me
Its the land of the free
Do as you please
Freedom is good to a point for all
But only to a point as I see
This land
These cities
Have all taken advantage of their freedom to the max.
For now all I hear is crashes and screams
Shots and cries
And every day I feel
As if I'm about to die
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