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Old 05-26-2008, 03:03 PM
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I like this write actually - The voice is solid, though the content may be seen as somewhat of self-loathing (if I've read correctly) --- One thing I would point out though and suggest you correct ASAP: SPELLING - there are tons of spelling errors which made it difficult for me to appreciate. Please use spellcheck to correct all the glaring spelling errors. Even the title is misspelled - You mean Dishonored Temple. Correcting the spelling alone will help this write immensely. After you do that then perhaps I can suggest a few things that will make the write publishable

Thanx for sharing! An interesting write no doubt.

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