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05-28-2008, 07:01 PM

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Biography: Jacquii Cooke is a 32 year old Black Poet from Oak Ridge, Tennessee. As Webmistress of Poetry in Color Forum, she is devoted to the more abstract styles, especially those with a strong feminine voice that center around the topic of redemption and righting the wrongs of past transgressions.

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Your raven mane wild and soft in the light
Stars glitter throughout the silk; reminders of twilight

Ooooo THEA - I thought this poem is especially sensual and definitely paints a picture of someone who's vulnerable to love but still accepts the challenge of finding love. I like how you have painted this delicate vulnerability. And the words... They just look so fabulous on the page IMO.

A very nice write and the rhyme schematic is so natural and unforced = Thanx for the sharing

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