An interestingly somber tone to this poem MYSTY - the forecast says rain
((re. Here come the melancholy rains)) - But looking deeper into your words - it looks like a possible sunshiny day. You always impress me with your nature writes. This poem for instance offers a certain insight into perfecting ones world, the whole while, paying tribute to the rain. I think this is what I like most about this write: The tip-of-the-hat towards nature and the grand simile of rain not spoiling the parade LOL --- There's encouragement in your words that really epitomizes the title Expand Your Worlds. There's hope and gentleness and kind encouragement!
Quote:
Melancholy sighs
as the sun burns off the mist
and once again reality;
evident pains and sorrows
whispers of dreams behind
closed eyes; the world awaits
the lover, the fairy,
the kindly queen.
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I liked this stanza the most for its all-inclusive aspect. I do think you are being a bit "mystical" with your poetics in this stanza though - I'm sensing a double-entendre or sorts LOL - I won't expound on that though - but I like this stanza and the entire write really.
Nice write. Thanx for the sharing
Jacquii.
