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Hello Mysty!
I really do enjoy this poem of yours... and I do just love nature poems and you wove such beautiful imagery with the rain, mist, and I especially enjoyed how the poem began with the first stanza. I like how you have the underlying message of the rains cleansing and kind of starting things anew... and wanting that to happen in life as well as with what the rains do. I think that this was a very poigant point and I like how you intertwined this with the imagery of the mist and what is happening with nature.
One of my favorite stanzas was the first stanza and I just think that set up the poem really well and kind of began it with a "bang!" I wanted to definitely read more and I just thought it was a beautiful beginning to it. I also felt that the poem flowed nicely from one line to the next and you did a good job with this as well.
Altogether, I'm glad that I came across your poem and thanks for sharing!
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