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Hello Sealiah!
Well, this is my first time reading and reviewing your work, I believe, so first off I'd like to say that it's nice to meet you! Secondly, well, I enjoyed reading this poem of yours. I think that the emotions of the poem are very strong and I also liked the rhyming you used with your poem. I felt that the rhyming was unpredictable and I definitely enjoy it when I can't predict what rhyme is coming next and what the poet will be using for the rhyme. I felt like the poem flowed easily into the next line and I especially liked the last line of the last stanza, I think that was a great ending to your poem.
Anywho, I'm glad that I came across this and thank you for sharing!
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