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Hello seajay!
First off, welcome to the JPIC Community! Secondly, I must say that I like and enjoyed reading this poem. One of my favorite seasons of the year is fall and I love how the leaves change different colors and kind of dance in the wind before they hit the ground and I think that you did a good job describing this. One of my favorite parts was how you broke up the middle of your poem and formatted it with this part here:
as
they
fall.
I liked how you broke up the poem with this and forced the reader to slow down and read each word separately. I also enjoyed how with the last stanza of your poem it kind of shortened down with the last few lines. I also enjoyed how you kind of asked the reader to imagine what the leaves were thinking when they were falling down and stripped away from their mother tree. I thought that this poem was interesting and intriguing as well. Thank you for sharing!
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