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Can you hear the music,
does it rock you to sleep,
does it pull on your emotions
running so deep?
i love your use of the music pulling them in, it gives great imagery.
Smile and dance...
Feel the music, mesmerize and tantalize…
i think the second line interupts the flow of the poem.
sorry if someone already stated this, i'm learning to critique. i hope i wasn't too late!
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