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Hello Moonchild!
I really like how you include an image with your poems and the image that you show with this poem compliments your poem just perfectly. This is a unique story that you're telling with your poem and very creative too. When I was reading it I was wondering what inspired it? And is this a story that you heard/read before about this time thief the weasal wasp?
One suggestion I'd make is with this below:
Stealing future reason and rhyme.
He'll tamper with time and make seasons shorter.
We humans shall pay for his crime.
I'd suggest that since you captilized the first letter of the first line with the beginning of your stanzas. So, I'd suggest captilizing the "s" in stealing, though this is completely up to you.
Anywho, besides that I don't have anything else to suggest. I really did enjoy this poem and what a unique concept it was. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing!
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