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Gail
Thank you first of all... I joined this site to get some help with wrapping my head around poetry. So your ( as being the only one) opinion is a blessing.
Ok this i guess was kinda taken out of text as I wrote it in a restaurant the other day. I kept hearing these loud and obnoxious guys talking about the war and how there couldnt be a god. This ones going to hell that ones going to hell. All this sent my mind in a frenzy and I wrote. So I guess there needs to be a lead into it as I will work on it......
Thank you
Marc
P.S. I will post one as well that had a little more time to brew...
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