Wow Kit.... this is quite the introspective poem. I could see that cage and see the glittering, glowing ball circling sparkles of light everywhere. Disco era wasn't it? Excellent writing Kit. I love how you are so able to lead the reader to envision the picture. My favorite lines:
Quote:
Every time she recalled
Dancing in Detroit
In the summertime
In the ‘70s
A lifetime before we met
I was once foolish enough
To think I had nothing
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Thanks for the memories stirring and for a wonderful poem.
Mysty
