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Old 06-29-2008, 12:20 PM
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Dear SergoB,

I love new, creative, and fresh poetry. The brevity of this piece emphasizes and lends the reader to indeed ponder upon the questions. The question approach is very interesting, and I did like the lead in with the first line stating...The eyes....

If I may ask, what was your inspiration for such a fresh piece?

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