Quote:
Originally Posted by erikestabrook
dark storm clouds then arise
and ruin the sound of my lovely chimes
but when they pass the birds sing with them
a ting and chirp all in rhythm.
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Dear Erik,
I really enjoyed this write. It was refreshing, had a clear message, and was quite beautiful in its short breath. The title drew me in first and then the beauty of the words. The last lines that I highlighted are priceless and ring true. Love the rhyming as well as I really do not see that in your poetry. Thank you for making me smile and feeling so warm inside. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Kim
