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Hello Mysty!
Yeah, I know what you mean by views to comments, but this is my first time viewing your poem and I just had to comment on it.
A simple tear
within itself is the key,
that holds the secret
to our humanity.-
Wow, this first stanza had me thinking, I read it quickly but took a moment after I read it to analyze what it was saying. I can't agree more with what it is saying though, showing emotions and crying is a beautiful thing, and is a kind of key to the lock that holds humanity.
And, I can't agree more that underneath it all, no matter what, we are all the same. 10 toes and fingers, we all cry, and that we all have beating hearts. So, I couldn't agree with you more that all of us are the same. My favorite stanza was the one I pointed out above, but I overall enjoyed reading this poem. Altogether, I'm glad I came across this poem and thank you for sharing!
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