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Hello!
I believe this may be the first poem that I've read of yours so first off it's nice to meet you! Secondly, this is a dark, yet, very intriguing and interesting write you have here. Your rhyming with it flowed from one line to the next and I didn't think was too obvious either, which can be a problem sometimes with rhyming poems. It's not forced which really aids to the rhythm of it and it just reads real smoothly.
My favorite line is definitely the last:
Only the blind can say seeing is believing.
That just packs a punch and gives your poem a very strong ending. I really do like what this says too with this line and just thought that this was great. Anywho, I just overall enjoyed reading this poem and the underlying darkness with it. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing away!
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