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Old 07-05-2008, 06:44 PM
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nice poem, i can c where ur coming from with it. sometimes its hard to get over relationships, especially when ur the one whose told the news =/. but yeah, i luv the gun reference, clever usage. all in all tho the poem's rly easy to relate to and such, nice job
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