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I am not a city girl, but (or so) your poem hits my image of city "smack on." I love the cat's rubber feet. In the second stanza, you might consider deleting "big" because we know the towers are big.
I agree with Jeff about the ellipses. Think about dropping "as the." At first I rebelled against "infinite" twice, but now that I have reread, I see it is just right. You're from Michigan; is this Detroit?
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