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Hey MsJacquii!
I really do love coming across your work because you have a unique style and way of writing poetry that I haven't encountered before, plus, your abstract poetry just gets me thinking and has beautiful imagery with it that I just enjoy overall. This poem, especially the ending, reminded me of the act of giving or receiving pleasure with the release of tension and how the end refers to damnation that kind of fit into this idea for me.
I really liked the darkness of it and the abstractness of this poem too. And, I gotta say, I think that my favorite is the last stanza which reminds me of pleasure and that kind of amazing release that you get from it. Anywho, thank you for sharing this and keep on writing away!
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