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I just checked over the document and there isn't one misspelled word in it! At least not one that wasn't misspelled on purpose. The grammar is a little weird. Its based on breathing stops and rhythm - more like a poem - than the rules of grammar, which are standardly used in fiction.
But thank you for taking the time! Please bear with me; this thing I wrote over the course of a month and it picks up as it moves on. It's very surrealist; thus the seemingly irrelevant details. I'm trying to recreate the dreamlike stupor I imagined this man to experience; the alienation from community and language; his misplaced dreams and ideals; his inability to sever from his past. Anyway, I'll post part two. This was the boring part, setting up the ending.
dave
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