Wow, Erik! Your work improves each time I read it. The tangible emotions,
how I wanted to believe / in you / In us, the images so vivid,
I brush away your hair, I can almost touch them, is simply fantastic.
Unlike Jeff, I didn't get that she had passed away, but that she was only a image on a screen, perhaps an unrequited love, but after reading his comments, I'm thinking, duh! why did I see that?
Anyway, Erik, I do have one suggestion...
Now when it matters I cannot feel...I hope you don't mind.
An emotional, tangible picture to watch in a poetic version.
hugs,
Gail
