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08-07-2008, 02:05 PM

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JeffMeyer

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Biography: I'm just a guy, HAPPILY married ten years (thank you--throw money, not flowers) with three kids tryin' to get by on a wage that stays the same in a world where prices simply don't. (You know the story). I love the out-of-doors, and in-of-books. I am a wordsnob and a vocabulary geek; I have a very off-kilter sense of humor based mostly in liguistics and the appreciation of the non-sequiter.

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Rollie:

Interesting. I felt the skewed reality fo the piece, but didn't care for the seventeen-unit onetary value. As opposed to off-kilter reality, that shifted the whole thing over to sci-fi for me, which gave it a different feel, and not what I thought you intended.

I'm interested to see how you continue to explore this pathetic character and his pitiable plight. I'm definitely looking forward to finding out why his chest is opening up and closing from wound to rash in less than 24 hours!

Post more; I'll certainly read along!

--Jeff Meyer