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I am surprised by your reply.the removal of the 'It is' and 'the' are excellent suggestions which were never picked up by anyone else.
A writer cannot see his mistakes and all credit goes to you for the mistake i made in keeping them.
This is the most complex poem of mine and the last two lines were written after I had received answers from my Guru ji: that truth is what you believe relate to you and as you see it.
Quite different it may be universally.
Glad to know you and the brilliance in your understanding.
Thank you from my heart.
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